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Sunday, January 13, 2008

Lovers plight

Tears fall, shivering in the cold, 
Eyes reddened and hair ruffled. 
He looked at the sky,dark blue skies, 
Mist all around hassled those eyes. 
Wondered if the sun would appear, 
Thoughts aplenty, mind clouded murkier. 
Hurtful feelings scoffed at his resistance, 
Scorned the paucity of haughty confidence. 

 His love was betrothed to somebody else, 
Laughed at him, the unforgiving remorse. 
Words betrayed but not the eyes clamour, 
Could this moment burn away forever? 
Was it his fault or was it hers? 
Some feeble mind whispered neither's.

4 comments:

Xorkes said...

Nice :-)

shayon said...

as usual....a thot provokin read...
please keep writing...

Giftson Kirubakaran said...

i wrote this after i was deeply affected by the feelings of my friend.this is for him

Unknown said...

tooo good man

keep on writing